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2015广州高考二模我校英语平均分116.5(不含口语)。小写作年级平均分11.5;大写作平均分18.9. 2015高考口语年级平均13分。江悦文14.5总分130高三18(图片双击可放大)

 With the theme of "Giving Presents to our school", an activity intended for all the graduates from Senior 3 will be held, aiming to express students' gratitude and best wishes to our school. For the gift, it can be a photo album collecting images of events in our school, which will surely remind us of the precious memory. Besides, original art works completed by one student or more are equally welcome in every  form such as paintings, poems, songs and so on. Additionally, Students Union  plans to establish an online message board, where students have access to signing their names as well as showing their appreciation. And of course, we are glad to see your actively participating and have your valuable advice.

刘家琪14总分129高三1

The Student Union is now planning to organize an activity in which all the pre-graduates in Senior 3 would have the chance to send a gift to our school so as to convey gratitude and to send best wishes. The gift could be an album of photos taken in school activities in memory of those never-fade-away moments or an original art work. As for the art work, both the number of its authors and the form are not restricted that it could be an independent work or a work finished in groups and those paintings, poems, songs or masterpieces in any other form are welcomed. In addition, an online message board would be provided by the Student Union in convenience of those who feel like to sign their names expressing thanks. Plus, we sincerely wish that any student in Senior 3 could take an active part in the meaningful activity and we are also looking forward to sincere advice.

凌卉妍14总分127高三3

 An activity will be conducted to express our gratitude and wishes with the theme of "Giving a present to our school" with all the senior 3 students participating in. Photo albums should be photos of our school activities in order to share the memory. Besides, the art works can be created by a person or more in every form such as paintings, poems and songs. What’s more, the Students Union Community will set up an online message board, serving as a place for student to sign their names and show their gratitude. We cherish the hope that all the students in senior 3 will participate in the activity actively and voice their advice.

区奕彤14总分124高三2

 Dear Senior Three Graduates,

To express gratitude and wishes for our school, we are organizing an activity with theme of “Sending Gifts to Our School”. In this activity, you are required to offer gifts, which can be photo albums or art creations. If you decide to offer photo albums, please include photos of school activities so that precious memory can be shared; or if you want to send art creations, you can paint a picture, write poems or compose  songs personally or cooperatively.

   We will set up online message board, where you can leave your signatures to express gratitude. Last but not the least, we welcome your suggestions and look forward to your participation.

   Regards,

Students Union

夏学森14总分124高三1

 The Student Union intends to organize an activity with the theme of presenting gifts to our school. The activity will involve all the Senior 3 graduates to pay tribute and wishes to our mother school. To share valuable memories, the gifts are expected to be photos collections about school activities. Also, students can  bring their personal or team-making original art works, with no limit on form, such as paintings, poems and songs. The Student Union will set up online message board for everyone to sign the name and express gratitude and we hope that everyone will take part in the activity enthusiastically as well as offering advice.

张效天 14总分124分高三2

 Aimed at expressing the gratitude and the hopes, all the graduates from Senior Three will be engaged in the activity with the theme “presenting gifts to the mother school”. Albums are expected to be the gift, which contain pictures of school activities and share our valuable memory. In addition, students can create art works on their own by one or several students in diverse forms, such  as painting, songs and poems. The Student Union will establish online message board to provide a platform for students to sign their names and express thankfulness. As last, I hope students can play an active role and propose some suggestions.

刘熙5+19=24总分132高三8

 Family values are established or changed by a family in specific circumstances and then passed down to descendants. It results in a person’s admirable behaviors, the unity of a family and individual identity.

For me, I attach great importance to family values as families are where we born, where we grow up and where we are initially educated. Inevitably, family values affect our mind deeply. And so do our offspring, which causes a chain effect continuously.

Therefore, my parents and I shoulder the responsibility of forming correct family values including patriotism, hardworking, optimism, kindness, filial piety, etc. We rank being a patriot first as it is the motherland that allows the potential of our own development and the pursuit for a better life.

Factually this value has become a seed grown in my heart and now I harvest the love to my country, which even affects my emotion and behaviors. Mentally, I’m intrigued when hearing news that China adopts new policies, hoping that one day I will be the governor taking effective measures. Practically, I participated in the pretest against the injustice actions taken by Japan concerning Diaoyu Island, moved by the enthusiasm of the people around me. The family value shapes me as a patriot gloriously.

谭施靖4+19=23总分129高三3

 Family values are principles that help us to define us as human and can change over time. They shape the way we behave, help families stick together and give us our identity. Besides, they can be learned and passed down from generation to generation.

From where I stand I attach great importance to family values mainly for the following reasons. For individuals, we can learn valuable virtue from family values and grow more mature. For the whole family, a family value is the most basic part, without which they cannot be connected tightly. Therefore, we need family values like fish need water.

 I have bared my family value, honesty and donation in my mind. Only by behaving honesty can we be accepted by the society. So we regard honesty as the fundamental part. In addition, as the saying goes, “Rose given fragrance in hand.” Donation is also an indispensable spirit in our family values.

My personal experience can serve as a typical example to illustrate the profound influence that my family values have exerted on me. Once I donated many story books to a poor kid in mountainous area. Recently, he had won a prize in literature and he wrote me a letter to convey his gratitude. It is my family value that gives me the chance to light the way for others.

王潍乐5+19=24总分128高三18

 Family values, which are passed down and change over time, shape us, define us and make us admire good behaviors. These principles also keep families together, comforting us, and made us who we are.

In my opinion, family value is essential for many factors. For one thing, it builds a family as a team but not individuals who always think for their own benefits. For another, these values mentally help us make decisions and behave like a decent person.

There are also some principles in my family. The most acknowledged one is forgiveness, which not only gives us but also others relieves when others make a mistake. Another one that contributes to my personality is to be happy because life is too short to afford a minute of weeping.

My personal experience is a good case in point to illustrate the influences that family values exert on me. There was a time when my family was getting through a hard time. Instead of complaining my parents could not offer me what other kids had, I chose to lay my attention on what I had already had, my kite. Whenever, the wind came, that smiling bird would always flying freely in the sky. I spent my childhood watching and flying the kite, which brought me tons of fun. I still remembered my mom taught me to be happy like the smiling bird and that is why now I smile and embrace the light.  

叶梓杰4+19=23总分128高三18

 The passage mainly tells that family values are principles that are learned, passed down from generation to generation and changed over time. Besides, they can shape our behavior, unite the family members and make us who we are.

From my personal perspective, family values are extreme significant for several reasons. The most commonly seen one lies in the harmonious atmosphere that we make every effort to keep in our families. Another factor is that the healthy values help us build up good qualities which may contribute to our social status.

First of all, the values my family holds is that every family members should raise the awareness of behavior, which means we should behave properly. Moreover, honesty and respect to each other, especially to the old, are what we also stressed.

Therefore, how family values influence members can be fully illustrated from my personal experience. One day, the adults in my family were discussing the family issues in a serious atmosphere. As young boys, my brother and I kept playing in the room, which was annoying. My father scolded us when he finally could not bear it any more. That night, he taught me a big lesson on how to behave properly. As I pointed out above, it was our family values that transformed me into a well behaved person, who is responsible for his actions.  

凌妍卉4+19=23总分127高三3

 Family values are learnt and passed down from generation to generation. They shape our behavior when people with admirable behaviors are taught by their families. They also help families stick together when problems arise. What is more, they give us our identity as they influence our own character.

From my own perspective, family values are of great importance. For one thing, they shape our behavior as we spent most of our time with our families when we were little so the family values influence us a lot. For another, family values will be of great significance when problems arise, they will protect our families from being broken.

As for me, the family values of my family are that never lose hope, be a strong and positive person. My family cherishes the hope that all of our family members can defeat whatever hardships we will go through in the future. Influenced by my family, I am deeply convinced that optimism will bring me to a brighter future.

My personal experience can serve as a vivid point to illustrate the influence that my family values bring to me. My English mark was low when I was in Senior 2. I felt frustrated and I buried myself in sorrow. However, it occurred to me that my family values are that one should never lose hope, so I started to spare no effort to learn English. I memorized English words days and nights. Finally, I got the best mark of our class. It is my family values that helped me made a progress.

梁加持5+18=24总分127高三5

 The article states the significance of family values which not only hold the family together but also shape the way we behave and make us who we are.

     From where I stand, family values are of great necessity both for an individual and a society. For one thing, from the values passed down, one can learn how to behave politely and address things appropriately when facing the outside world alone. For another, only when the society members are equipped with good qualities can the society function well.

Our family also has our own values, of which honesty is the most vital one. We believe that honesty is the best policy. One lack of honesty does not deserve others’ respect and could not stand steadily in the society.

Indeed, my family values do exert great influence on me. Since I have been told not to lie from my childhood, I have always obeyed this policy. When others tried to trick on some small exams, I insisted I finish them myself, no matter how hard they were or how bad the marks I might got. And as time went by, my principle of honesty, my family values help me win my teachers and friends’ respects. I am known for being kind and honest and people are all willing to tell their secrets to me then. It is my family values that shape me who I am now.    

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2015广州高考二模我校英语平均分116.5(不含口语)。小写作年级平均分11.5;大写作平均分18.9. 2015高考口语年级平均13分。

2014广东省高考我校英语平均分为125.3.总分138分以上有45

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